So sad situation, and can't enjoy this Corona matters itself in this situation. How can we thank him. May be it's satcastically said. But it will not taste good at this hour of pandemic which rules over our whole planet.. This is only my feeling. So , I feel sorry to mention this here. Thank you, Shankar ji.
Dear Sir, in this QUATRAIN TWO we can't thank Corona. In QUATRAIN ONE and TWO Corona has been painted as a curse. In QUATRAIN THREE, u can read why Corona is a blessing. Tq for sharing your honest remarks without fail.
Sure, Shankarji. I shall fo it. Pl don't feel bad on my present comments. Since, the title of this Quatrain, mismatches to the descriptive lines it and it may be confusing to the reader. In a poem, even if it starts with an different view, it will give the risht vision atleast before it ends. Then there is no problem. When this piece of the same subject stands alone I creates the different emotion in the reader's mind. Only to bring it out, I presented my comment like that. So I request you, not to measure it in that meaning. It stands good only for the subjective Quatrain. If you combine it with another with positive approach, definitely this will change. No doubt. My humble request to take it in this sense. Thank you, for your positive vision through your counter comment.
So sad situation, and can't enjoy this Corona matters itself in this situation. How can we thank him. May be it's satcastically said. But it will not taste good at this hour of pandemic which rules over our whole planet.. This is only my feeling. So , I feel sorry
ReplyDeleteto mention this here. Thank you, Shankar ji.
Dear Sir, in this QUATRAIN TWO we can't thank Corona. In QUATRAIN ONE and TWO Corona has been painted as a curse. In QUATRAIN THREE, u can read why Corona is a blessing. Tq for sharing your honest remarks without fail.
DeleteSure, Shankarji. I shall fo it. Pl don't feel bad on my present comments.
ReplyDeleteSince, the title of this Quatrain, mismatches to the descriptive lines it and it may be confusing to the reader. In a poem, even if it starts with an different view, it will give the risht vision atleast before it ends. Then there is no problem.
When this piece of the same subject stands alone
I creates the different emotion in the reader's mind. Only to bring it out, I presented my comment like that. So I request you, not to measure it in that meaning. It stands good only for the subjective Quatrain. If you combine it with another with positive approach, definitely this will change. No doubt. My humble request to take it in this sense. Thank you, for your positive vision through your counter comment.