O MY DEAR! DON'T FORGET THIS.
O my Dear! "Even an ape is more charming and and alluring in its sparky youth!"
As you know the common adage in Sanskrit; then how can we ignore the truth,
That your features are blessed with a blooming blossom's grace, tenderness and vivacity?
But, the Keatsian Beauty, that adorns your heart, shines to me more than the purest gold's purity!
O my Dear! The petal like softness of your tone stirs me more than a sweetest song,
The rare humility, that you symbolise, hums to my ears eager, enchanted and far flung,
Your honey bee's generosity generates an enviable and illuminating aura around you,
The most vital facet of your character is, like the modern multitude, you never change your hue!
O my Dear! Due to all these most fertile factors you are ever glued to my Soul so near:
My selfless love for you is never soiled by any evil motives of a promiscuous liar,
My eternal love for you will ever shine more steadily than a beacon in the wildest tempest,
And joyously you will recite the refrain of my love, "I alone could pass your Love's litmus test!"
Copyright ©️ Dr Shankar D Mishra, Bhubaneswar, Odisha, India
Beautiful...So sweet. Best wishes Sir
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ReplyDeleteGratitude dear Sir!🌹🙏
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ReplyDeleteIt's so colourful and make it a festival like Holi while reading beautiful poems! All the best wishes to you!
Gratitude dear Sir!🌹🙏
DeleteFantastic sir, you are a master of words God bless
ReplyDeleteGratitude dear Sir!🌹🙏
DeleteDear Cijo Joseph Sir, I am pasting your comment on this poem posted on my timeline with gratitude🙏
ReplyDeleteDear Shankar Ji,
Your poem titled "O My Dear! Don't Forget This" is a poem that is one with the beloved in every sense of the term.Here,the beauty of the beloved is extolled to the sky.Her traits are shouted from the housetops,her physical attractiveness is accorded ample importance,her love is termed as interminable,her movements are glorified to the core,her heart is portrayed as an immaculate thing altogether,her look is described as alluring and enticing,her behaviour is depicted as humility personified to a large extent,her presence is positive to the hilt,her attitude is solid and trustworthy,her love is everlasting and does have no possessive tinge in it,her presence can't be diminished in the most turbulent occasion of life and her love is the alpha and omega of life from one end to the next.This poem also sheds light on the very fact that youthful vigour does have so many rosy prospects within its fold.Kudos to you for composing such a poem of marvellous and fantastic nature.
Cijo Joseph Chennelil.
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